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Eugenia P. Frankenberg 🥀's avatar

i have run out of words on how to praise your poetry other than: simply beautiful!

Binu Sivan's avatar

The last two lines! So poignant 💔

Azure Jo Storm's avatar

Dreaming does feel like your at sea. Floating on waves made of memories or wishes deep inside of you. I really enjoyed this piece, thank you for sharing!

Michael Drummond's avatar

This is quite a dream sequence, lost at sea or drowning perhaps. Very cool.

Karen E Sandberg's avatar

Lovely poem. Again.

Rolando Andrade's avatar

This beautiful poem elegantly expresses the desire to stay in one's comfort zone, and how this can ultimately be uncomfortable. It's worth reading.