It's a wonderful poem, ending with a divine stanza. We don't always hold our own hand, and that's how loneliness and helplessness arise, even when we're accompanied. Thank you
Thank you Nicholas! I really appreciate the kind words. I went through some of your work the other day; really enjoyed the sonnets! Looking forward to diving into more.
I see the paper dolls holding hands in harmony with other world wide figures. Peace ☮️
Thanks for reading!
It's a wonderful poem, ending with a divine stanza. We don't always hold our own hand, and that's how loneliness and helplessness arise, even when we're accompanied. Thank you
Truly! Thank you for reading Rolando; and I'm glad you enjoyed the last lines.
I have always been holding my own hand -- what a perfect line at the end of your poem! Love the images.
Thank you Karen! I'm so happy you liked the images.
Anagha – this is so wonderful. Absolutely appreciate your work and your deft, sophisticated management of metaphor and imagery. If you're interested, I also post here on Sundays: https://wildsonnets.substack.com/p/the-wild-sonnets-2-new-poems
Thank you Nicholas! I really appreciate the kind words. I went through some of your work the other day; really enjoyed the sonnets! Looking forward to diving into more.
'I have always felt like many things unravelling from one thing.
I have always been holding my own hand'
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Thank you so much <3
I so appreciate your support, Indra! Thank you for always noticing the details I try and bring to my work.