To discover a knew knowledge appealing away the cloak from the journey and see the end of the road in sight. We as your friends , and world family ride with you; see through your eyes, your vision expands the starās light to novaās burst into a tomorrow seen today. Exquisite poetic moments pierced together as a quilt that warm the spirit.
Genius! I was particularly struck by the way you juxtapose the mapāan emblem of tangible directionāwith the delicate observation of the creases around a loved oneās eyes, highlighting the contrast between the predictable and the intimate.
I know what you went through! We lost power for about 3-4 days! (See poem, Mother Nature's Destruction) I hated being without my computer and I tried to write on paper and then I went back to my computer when the power came back on!
What beautiful writing, and so interesting to hear how you wrote and pieced it. Poetic prose at its very best!
Thank you so much! Iām glad you found the process interesting š
To peel back the sky. To find pinpricks of light.
To discover a knew knowledge appealing away the cloak from the journey and see the end of the road in sight. We as your friends , and world family ride with you; see through your eyes, your vision expands the starās light to novaās burst into a tomorrow seen today. Exquisite poetic moments pierced together as a quilt that warm the spirit.
Genius! I was particularly struck by the way you juxtapose the mapāan emblem of tangible directionāwith the delicate observation of the creases around a loved oneās eyes, highlighting the contrast between the predictable and the intimate.
Oh, Iām so glad you picked up on that Mohika! Thanks for reading :)
I know what you went through! We lost power for about 3-4 days! (See poem, Mother Nature's Destruction) I hated being without my computer and I tried to write on paper and then I went back to my computer when the power came back on!
Relatable!
I love the feeling tone of your poems. Each one in your voice, each one unique and beautiful with something new to offer.
This is so kind š
āpink clouds darken like dying rosesā - absolutely gorgeous writing. So loved this piece. Really beautiful.
Thank you so much, Indra. I really appreciate your comment.
Lovely!