Oh that last passage is such a great ending.. like a big crashing cymbol in an orchestra suddenly eviscerating the silent stillness. Overall a gorgeous study, thanks so much for continuing to share your work.
The Lake : a visual visit and self reflection , the now moment deeply touched by a hand that breaks through the surface to see the creatures in the deepest depths in details explored by diving under the surface to see the world as a whole new place shared with readers taken with you.
Oh that last passage is such a great ending.. like a big crashing cymbol in an orchestra suddenly eviscerating the silent stillness. Overall a gorgeous study, thanks so much for continuing to share your work.
David! Thank you so much for continuing you read, and being so generous each time 💜
The Lake : a visual visit and self reflection , the now moment deeply touched by a hand that breaks through the surface to see the creatures in the deepest depths in details explored by diving under the surface to see the world as a whole new place shared with readers taken with you.
Thank you for reading!
That takes a turn I hadn't expected. I enjoyed reading this. Great images - moves from ordinary to magical.
Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed the turn. Thanks for reading, as always Karen.
Wow! Beautiful poem!
Thank you ☺️
Absolutely beautiful
Thank you Roelien!
That was truly outstanding, Anagha. Beautiful. Profound.
Comments like this really move me :') Thank you Leon!
Thank YOU!
Wow, Anagha. Amazing poem. Some parts really reminded me of Walt Whitman. But with a Smrithi originality!
That is a tremendous compliment! Thank you for your generosity Don.
A song I wrote in 2007, "The Final Frontier.
The sky blue lake's beyond the trees ahead.
I'm still woking through what the doctor said.
What a long,strange glorious trip it's been.
Soon I'll walk to the edge and dive right in.
The water looks so clean
The weather's clear and cool.
The scenery seems immortal in the sunshine and the dew.
So I'll take some time to ponder my last moments here.
Standing on the edge of the final frontier.
Your writing is amazing and evocative and prompted this response
A long, strange glorious trip indeed! And I love how themes appear between the works of different writers - thank you Malcolm.
This is wonderful—and the ending is divine. Just perfect.
LeeAnn! I always love hearing from you, thank you.
So beautiful, Anagha!
Thank you so much Paul :)
This is so good 🤍
Thank you so much Huma
Love the description of everything right before the crash of diving in!
Thank you Kerith!
Beautiful, brilliant, and profound...
This made my day!!! Thank you Indra <3
I feel very encouraged.
oh thank you Susy! that means a ton, thank you for reading